The most common criticisms were focused on the music, which was highly divisive with some people claiming it fit the action well and others insisting the opposite. Unfortunately changing the music would necessitate a re-edit, which I’m not sure I have the time for so close to the deadline. I will however look into other tracks and possibly swap the music before the end of year show.
Here is an updated version of the video with some of the feedback from the final crit taken onboard. There are lots more changes I’d like to make but which aren’t feasible in the remaining time.